Inspiration Call: Write about a unique first kiss


Inspiration Call: Write about a unique first kiss.
Is it your main character’s first kiss ever, or just first kiss with this other person? Does the kiss happen organically, or is it “staged” What are the ages of the two kissers? Who initiates it?
In addition to describing the situation, try to describe all of the senses—not just feel. How do the kissers’ breath smell? How do their mouths taste? Do either or both of them have their eyes open? As they kiss, what interesting things are they hearing?

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  1. A Kiss

    I knew I loved him, with each conversation,
    the park bench knew the gravity of emotion;
    it weighed indelibly upon each wood plank,
    that should have had our names carved there

    He leaned against my car, a gentle breeze
    fluttering the top of his hair, eyes shielded
    from the sun, tall figure of a man, relaxed
    figure, with a drawl when he spoke to me

    My brain screamed silently, “don’t
    watch my mouth form words – kiss
    me, for the love of God, just kiss me!”
    The silent scream, must have been heard
    He leaned down, pausing inches from my
    face, peering into my eyes with tenderness;
    he met my mouth with his, until…

    I was consumed
    I was consumed

    ©Brenda-Lee Ranta


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